Date: 2008-04-11 03:17 pm (UTC)
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ok. wow. i was not expecting to be this drawn into Jack's sidestep into the Crypt but you ladies did it up nice! She is a pretentious and kinky girl and I adore how she decides that she needs a change at the end. Her life is a stage, she is the lead actress and it is time for new props. I also love how we don't know her name. It gives us insight into how Jack is dealing with this new situation (not well).

Ok, and Daniel waiting in Jack's truck? Fantastic. His prediction of this not ending well? I can see the look on his face as he says it.

OMG and I almost forgot. I love the conversation on the cell phone in the coffee shop!

ok, where's the next part? (you know I am only tap-tap-tapping my foot with impatience because I wanna know nooooowwwwww not because I would presume to rush the writer, right???)
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